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Poe_Pot_Pie
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0 posted 2003-06-02 11:20 AM


My Play

The sky is my backdrop.
The ground is my stage.
Everything said is according to the script.
The chairs, tables and lamps,
Are nothing more than props.
My hair is hidden by wigs,
And my clothes are merely coustumes.
Who are all my friends and family?
They are no more than actors.
The strangers in the world,
Come to my play to watch me.
But to them,
I am only an actor.


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1 posted 2003-06-02 12:36 PM


I enjoyed this very much....I like the thoughts and ideas
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2 posted 2003-06-02 12:38 PM


neat thoughts
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3 posted 2003-06-02 12:40 PM


very interesting write. enjoyed
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4 posted 2003-06-10 06:48 AM


enjoyed the write, thanks...rose.


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5 posted 2003-06-10 06:55 AM


nice take on life, interesting read
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6 posted 2003-06-10 07:03 AM


i liked reading your thoughts very interesting poem i enjoyed it

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

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Saluting with misty eyes
7 posted 2003-06-10 07:42 AM


enjoyed

Day after day I'm more confused,
So I look for the light through the pouring rain...

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