Open Poetry #26 |
The Harmony Of Our Hearts!! |
KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Staring into your moonshade eyes Your vision borrowing mine, I blush and hide my smile You always say it brings your soul to life. Touching your fingertips is like Touching a cloudless sky. You lay your ear against my heart And it beats only for you. The laugh you free from the depths Of this tense, guarded soul Is one I've never heard before One of crystals of the sweetest sugar And as we dance atop The mountain that is ours We need not a drop of music... Just the harmony of our hearts. And nothing else compares. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
KoKo - a most soft write of feelings deep within... BC |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* two hearts that beat in harmony creating a living dance all their own...what could be more beautiful and romantic as that....Wonderful writing... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
KoKo, this is a very beautiful and romantic write. You know that this hopeless romantic loves it. Hugs Ethel |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thanks everyone!!!! You're sweethearts !! Love is quite a sweet, soft, beautiful thing !!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"And nothing else compares" just beautiful! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
you already know what i'm going to say... it's good to see this from you, makes my soul rest easier. you continue to amaze me. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yep, nothing else compares and I truly wish for this kind of robin egg blue sky to always shine in your hearts horizon and you can paint your very own clouds! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
koko,simply sweet hon. |
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