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Open Poetry #26

Sitting On You

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

0 posted 2003-06-06 10:59 PM

You cannot move.
I am sitting on you.
I steal your clothes.
I steal your boyfriend.
I surpress you!
I am sitting on you.

Your legs go numb.
You feel no pain.
For, I am sitting on you.

Under my control,
You sit.
For I am,
I have,
And will always,
Be sitting on you.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-06-06 11:02 PM

Interesting poem, though I am sure I would
not want to be the lap being sat upon. This
could be of several avenues...

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

2 posted 2003-06-06 11:18 PM

Oh Poe Pot Pie,

I know I have read your work before and enjoyed it. I love your name... Well, based on your writing, I sure wouldn't want to be your roommate. LOL But I know about this sitting on you business. Lot's of people have tried to sit on me...now I just give them a good, swift when I have a free leg. LOL

Enjoyed your verse.

Patricia

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

3 posted 2003-06-07 11:12 AM

Good for you! Just don't tell that to my sister. She inspired my poem.

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