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Open Poetry #26

shes all american

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-06-06 07:53 PM

shes all american

her blush of innocent is
shades of red

her skin so soft and
white

the color of her eyes
blu as the sky

stripes of white and red
sway in the breeze

stars of many twinkel
as she emerges

shes all american

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (06-06-2003 10:07 PM).]

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2003-06-06 08:10 PM

What can I, a Canadian say...except...I salute you...Magnificent....I love it...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-06-06 08:11 PM

Cute write...much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

3 posted 2003-06-06 08:24 PM

Very nice piece

I am Australian and we as a nation arent very patriotic. Great writing

Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-06-06 10:50 PM

Yes Glenn, she is, isn't she...

Thanx for this.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-07 03:27 AM

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