Open Poetry #26 |
I Could Never Feel Alone |
Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
I think of time I've wasted, In the twilight of my years. The pleasures I have tasted, Often mingled with my tears. I'd like to roll out of my bedroll, On a frosty Rocky morn, Up among the high sierras- Where the rivers all are born. There's a jay who's loudly scolding- My trespasses in his realm, Pretty soon I will be leaving, This high meadow all to him. There's a track down on the lakeshore, Has to be a mountain lion, She was hunting in the darkness, Seeking breakfast for her scion. While up here in the mountains- Something turns my thoughts to God, Who created all this beauty- Where few men have ever trod. Last night a mountain sunset- Painted all the western sky, Overcome by all the beauty, I could only sit and cry. The Aurora Borealis- Hung her curtains of pure light- Rippling in the icy stillness, What an awe-inspiring sight. In a way I'd like to die here, Let the earth encase my bones, With God's beauty all around me, I could never feel alone. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
John, I hear ya'. Excellent write as usual. Nature is my thing and especially the way you describe it! Thanks for the images you put in my head. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done John...great images created here..I felt like I was there.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
John, this is just beautiful. You have painted a picture of sheer delight with your words. Thankyou. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic John...wonderful imagery with this write. You gave me a case of wanderlust. Well done! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah...was there with you my friend... jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wishing i was there |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful descriptive writing...James |
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