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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2003-06-06 03:05 PM



Slag lined
Jagged thoughts
Erupted once
And now
Bare souls slice
On the leavings
Scraped from that plate
To the floor
As scraps the cur
In us could feed on.

Fetid
The attempt to roll
Across the rocks
And cover our own
Putrid odor
With that of yet
Another.

Go ahead…
Lie to me again.

Go ahead…
Tell me it doesn’t matter
Or that matter doesn’t
Care for then…

Dog that I am
Rarely bites the feeding
Hand

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-06-06 03:09 PM


Ouch.

You DO have a way...


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2 posted 2003-06-06 03:11 PM


Do have a way?

lol.. some ways are better left undone..it would seem... or at least at times it would seem that way.

thanks for the read K


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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2003-06-06 09:47 PM


I sure can relate to this one. Vivid and sad.
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4 posted 2003-06-07 12:51 PM


Yeah, I can smell this one. The dog rolling about in a scent masking scent.... So vividly that you must forgive my saying that this actually stinks.


Ish

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5 posted 2003-06-07 01:45 AM


Gee, I used to like junkyards (of course, that was before they became machine recycling centers).


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displaced
6 posted 2003-06-07 02:28 AM


dang!
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