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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Day And Hour a day can be endless or timeless and an hour oh this hour this endless this timeless hour.... [This message has been edited by Ratleader (06-06-2003 07:36 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"oh this hour this endless this timeless hour...." *smiling softly here.....Yes...* ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good morning, Ed...I have known hours that were like a minute and minutes that were hours. Waiting for something special takes hour-minutes.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Martie beat me to my reply!  Warm hugs, EA |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Reminds me of sitting and waiting for my next flight....or perhaps a phone call that never comes... welcome home.. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've used so few words to say so much... my reply won't follow your example, though. *G* You make a blonde think, you get verbose. *G* An hour can be infinitesimal or infinite... depending on the perspective. *S* And a day may be a small portion of a life... or the standard by which that life is measured. *S* I'll vote for timeless every time. *S* This is beautiful. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Fix your typo-endlessor-and this will be a flawless work. I love it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Ishmael Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 51 |
Much liked Ish |
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teledon Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 51Florida USA |
time is such an enigma .. it really has no definition .. I like your wonderfully brief look at it "keep it simple" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
seems like the beautiful moments we want to savor are so fleeting, and the lousy ones stick |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ratleader - and as you wrote, it can be timeless... BC |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Wonderfully put...it just seems that the older I get the faster time goes by...I have come to the conclusion that there is not much time in live so it is best just to live it the best I can...sometimes I wish an hour would last forever... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Some of them do last forever.....and if you're really lucky, some of the days last forever....but that doesn't happen often -- once every lifetime or so.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ed, I love the way your mind works. Thanks for clueing us in.  Patricia |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
oh this hour this endless this timeless hour.... The days and weeks that we have to wait to be together take forever........then there are certain moments when we are together that are timeless, because we forget all time......and then the last hour before we are apart again passes in a minute, it seems. Very good, thought-provoking write, Ed. Thank you.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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