A seaside picnic with Mexican standoff (Dogboy)

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Open Poetry #26

A seaside picnic with Mexican standoff (Dogboy)

Ishmael
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 51

0 posted 2003-06-06 01:32 PM

A seaside picnic with Mexican standoff

At the beach one summer day
Dogboy was roused to nearly aroused
by the parade of freshly pinked fecundity
While The Worm fretted
over the various complications
that could arise from such an arising
if caught in the open, so to speak
(Disgusted with it all,
Iggy decided on a pork chop)

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-06 01:35 PM

I really enjoyed your poems so far. But as to what they mean I don't know. LOL

Cold hands means a warm heart

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

2 posted 2003-06-10 01:22 AM

eager
egged
eat

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2003-06-11 07:12 PM

Thanks to an explanation I believe I understand these a little better. They are now fascinating.

I'm just finding buried treasures.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Ishmael
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 51

4 posted 2003-06-11 09:25 PM

Thank you, yes...the charactors here are the Id, the Ego and the Super-Ego. An exploration of the conflicts, you see.

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