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Rhymed Unease
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Rhymed Unease |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Rhymed Unease (little nothings) The emails there the pictures weight tiredness returns with the same refrains. Nothings changed the empty home the pounding thoughts of need, restrains. ~~*~~ There's burden here to hold of me and yet it's where I wish to be No song of verse or melody to touch me here and there, you see ~~*~~ I've waited longer more or less but it's still "never" must confess I've climbed before under duress to reach that peek of happiness ~~*~~ Secrets hold they stay untold my words stay mute no thoughts unfold ~~*~~ I wait, that's all that I can do in furrowed brow and thoughts of you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
There's burden here to hold of me and yet it's where I wish to be funny how we stay in places..emotionally or physically that burden us..but still in some way hold us... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Unfurrow that brow, gal... Just raise the lips in smile... ease the thoughts a little while... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you know, I can really relate to this lately....  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I've been there--and done that! Thank goodness that is all behind me! I eventually let it all go and now I am as free as a bluebird! You wrote well of these sorts of emotions and feelings and ties that bind... Loving hugs, Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I sure understand this. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M, I thought this all blended well, conveying a mood of unease, of being a little "antsy" so to speak... Nicely done. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
hit hard, to the point nicely put M  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I read this earlier, but was still in "sleep" mode--forgive me for waiting? But yep, the Cap called my favorite stanza too: "There's burden here to hold of me and yet it's where I wish to be" I've often called such a thing a comfortable chain...sigh. Thank you for your insight. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Cpat, well I am still here, holding onto my home, the only and last place I am comfortable with. I just hope I can hold onto it forever. Karilea, thanks, that was a cute little rhyme  M SEA, where have youbeen. You have been missed. M Linda, well some ties that bind are of necessity. I don't know if I will ever feel free. Thank you, M Sue, I knew you would understand. Barry, yup I was antsy and ready for a short gettaway which did me good. M bernie, thanks again. hugss M Karen, forgiven Sometimes it's almost like we enjoy punishing ourselves as if we deserve it.Thank you, M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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