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brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-06-06 01:35 AM



I wonder if someone could help me...
I
have
this...
        this...   little problem

you see?


I know it looks bad
but really
it's not ....that.....bad .......is it?

usually I keep the damn thing
inside
chain all nicely coiled

but...heh...today
whew boy
yeah

so....(smile)..you ever seen a person
with an iron chain hanging out of their forehead,
dragging a cinderblock on it?

no?
well
ok.....thanks for stopping anyway

I'm thinking maybe some ointment
or some Icyhot for my poor neck

man this cinderblock is heavy

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-06-06 01:58 AM


You can count on me. I know I wouldn't have to axe you twice, either.


Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
2 posted 2003-06-06 02:16 AM


Hey! I drag one of those around sometimes to!

Jason

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-06-06 04:12 AM


yeah...sigh
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2003-06-06 11:26 PM


"man this cinderblock is heavy"

And.....they don't get much lighter, dude.

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