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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-05 04:07 PM



Blue Note

a blue note
falling
too low
to rise above
the bar
C was a place
between black
and white
and now
it is
the color that
it sings


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-06-05 04:27 PM


C
Lies low
on the scale
and with cleft
designated
seems below
register
of ear
still...
we feel
vibrations
and know
the sound
is real


the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-06-05 04:36 PM


Sort, sweet, sad and beautiful All the things I like about a poem like this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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