Open Poetry #26 |
The Softest Truth of All |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"The Softest Truth of All" I first knew her when she was beautiful. The many days we spent together, the years that have passed, have taught me one thing . . . the softest truth of all is love, and her love was a blessing on my soul. I suppose God needed her more than I, but if he had only asked, I’d have told him - No, you don’t. She’s needed here, she’s a light in the dark, she helps us all see, she’s the softest truth of all, and the truth she shares is you - But I guess God needed her more than I, a reaffirmation of the softest truth of all . . . Love. w. james beard, jr. (c) june 2003 ...not about me, jimmy [This message has been edited by jwesley (06-05-2003 12:32 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Heartfelt & Lovely hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jimmy...don't know how to reply...but do know when a hug is needed. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You have brought tears to my eyes with your soft truth. I am sorry for your loss, but she is there with Him in all his glory and her beauty. But you know that. May God Bless Patricia |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You wrote with such depth of emotion and gentleness. Yours and the world's loss was Heaven's gain. Her memory lives on through you and throught others whose lives she touched. Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful heartfelt write Jimmy. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This was very heartfelt. And I loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
That was absolutely heart-wrenching. It's always a sad experience to have to let go of someone and not know why. I know how you feel having lost someone very close to me a couple years ago. The sad thing is, when I knew him, I had no idea he was sick. Just goes to show you that you can put all of your trust in GOD and still not know his master plan. But your poem expressed it best. Junior Member, yv |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
This is a great poem. I love how you put so much emotion into calm and soft words like you did. nice job ~*~*brezee*~*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very tender write |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a special moment in time we spend with someone who not only captures our heart, but shares with us faith. Smiles, TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done, I love when you write of the soft. *s M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"The softest truth of all." A beautiful way to see it...James |
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