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His Choice
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His Choice |
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[In]Visible Junior Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 11 |
When sun rises slow again tomorrow, it's another dawn in an unfair world. Can't share the intensity of your sorrow So cruel the way some fates unfurl Yours the very toughest choice Some feelings so hard to voice I know all too well. Hope lives in the light. notes: I wrote this for someone I know who lost his beloved girlfriend to a brain tumour. He was/is distraught and sadly maybe considering ending it. I don't know what choice he has made yet. |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
Your poem is very good! It really makes you imagine the pain the person is feeling and how he is suffereing inside himself. |
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