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dani Junior Member
since 2003-05-10
Posts 46 |
If I ever had him then what is happening to me wouldn't be happening He was there and it helped then he went I was suddenly in the middle of the ocean Nobody to help me but myself I was drowning and I still am I lost the safety and comfort I never had him because he didn't care this never started out as a poem i was just messaging one of my friends and i came out with it how many ways to say i love u... just 1... you make me want to die |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I think I know what you mean. This is my fault, I'm not understanding a lot of what people mean when they say and do things. But I think I know this one, which is to say he didn't care enough to stay, so he maybe never cared. It's an honest write, and that's good, I think. [This message has been edited by mirror man (06-05-2003 11:14 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know someone like that |
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