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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-06-04 05:04 PM

Art but thee, a simple thing
Occams razor, answers bring
But think of thee, and pity sings
Of tainted vows, and wedding rings

Art but thee, a bitter thing
Past and pain, are empty things
But think of thee, and pity brings
Solace in an angels wings

Art but thee, an angry thing
Hate becomes a ruthless king
But think of thee, And pitys' strings
Entangle peace in angry things

Art but thee, a pretty thing
A work of art, of everything
But think of thee, and pity sings
Of tainted vows and wedding rings

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

1 posted 2003-06-04 05:09 PM

Jason, so glad you decided to work more on this particular piece. Well done with candor, grace, and beauty, as befiting the old poets.

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

2 posted 2003-06-04 05:12 PM

Absolutely beautiful. This is so passionate and so utterly spellbounding. I'm almost speechless. I have a crazy question, what does "Occams" mean? Sorry, I know that's really crazy, but I'm all about expanding my vocabulary. Anyway, incredible write.

Junior Member,
yv

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-06-04 05:23 PM

nice write and read,,,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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4 posted 2003-06-05 04:52 AM

yeah....wow

juliek086
Junior Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 13
Arizona

5 posted 2003-06-05 03:17 PM

I love how this poem flowed and came together. Very strong piece.

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

6 posted 2003-06-05 07:02 PM

Thanks all,I worked hard on this one,for a friend.YV...occams razor is a base philosophy point.It means, simply, that the simplest answer to any question, is probably the right answer.Alot of study done on occams, for more info just try a search engine on occams razor.
Thanks for the read and replies friends.

Jason

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (06-05-2003 07:03 PM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-06-06 12:16 PM

from one who canrelate, you wrote this well,,,,, nice to read you again

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-06-07 07:43 PM

Jason:

will look more on the subject . . .
I love to learn

This is brilliant - and yes sadly
I can relate well to it too

Look for those angels' wings
they are always there
for each one of us
xxoo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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9 posted 2003-06-08 04:38 AM

agreeing with Sue

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