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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-06-04 11:47 AM





~This tiny garden Cherub was a gift from my antique Aunt Jewel~
~So with all reverence due, I dedicate this one to her~
June 2003




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Betty
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1 posted 2003-06-04 12:10 PM


This is so pretty.
Betty

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2 posted 2003-06-04 01:01 PM


beautiful! Marge you have a way with these!
Patricia
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3 posted 2003-06-04 02:03 PM


Marge,

A beautiful verse.  I have been wanting to write about my little cherub...she is a living one.  My little girl, especially when she was smaller, looked so much like a cherub.  I call her my Chubby Cherub.

Anyway, wait until you get a load of the mess of a sonnet I left in the classroom.  Shoot, I didn't even know about that 14 line thing.  I have that tendency to just right in there.  Karilea got a hold of me on that and the Da-dums...meter...Oh no...

Patricia

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4 posted 2003-06-04 03:00 PM


Marge, this is so beautiful. I think you know
how to write every form of poetry there is.
And you do it all so beautifully.  

Hugs  
Ethel


(Psst!! Patricia, did you see the post I put on your thread in the classroom? LOL At least you had some idea what a sonnet was. I didn't. We'll learn together. Okay?)  

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5 posted 2003-06-05 01:07 AM


Marge, this is so beautiful!
ethome
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6 posted 2003-06-05 01:10 AM


Hey Marge
You're one of the best word artists there is....Love this!

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7 posted 2003-06-10 12:15 PM


Dear Marge:  This is so sweet!  I love seeing these little treasures in a garden!

Love
Betty Lou

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Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2003-06-10 09:09 AM


You ALL are just the GREATEST !
Thank you for letting me share some of my little homestead photos with you~
Sometimes I feel like you all are here !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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9 posted 2003-06-11 12:56 PM


Such a nice lady to tend too, both of you.
~Sweet Marge~  I love those figurines in the garden, and the way you ended this.

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