Open Poetry #26 |
If You Only See |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Hope you would see me Hope you would hear me SingIng through the night If you only see me In this every day Every way You will only see me Standing here With my heart opened For you If you only see me cry Would you come closer to me And wipe away tears for me And wipe away tears for me If you only see me laugh you would see the way And the things I have done Looking for your love And bring with you If you only see me Every day Smiling upon a bright sun If you only see Like this....... [This message has been edited by vandana (06-04-2003 08:38 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I am sure that to see you like this..would melt his or anyone's heart... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What I see from all the poetry of yours that I have read, is that you are a beautiful, sweet and gentle soul. Warm hugs, Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - Nice write... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Vandana...just like this... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I really do like this poem. It's very pretty. Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very pretty writing |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) And we are all blessed to see you just as you always are...a loving, compassionate, and friendly spirit and friend! (kiss on cheek) May he always see you this way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
If you only see me Every day Smiling upon a bright sun If you only see Like this....... So many look and do no see! 'Tis sad indeed. Wonderful write ... hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
AWWW!!! Beautiful. Heartfelt. Warm. Magnificent. I loved this poem. It made me smile and made me cry. A cavalcade of emotions. Well done. Junior Member, yv |
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