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Til The First Morning Light
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Til The First Morning Light |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Til The First Morning Light A dream sailor lookin for a lover the seas of time bring me to you. seeking adventures to uncover I search your face for some truth An old spell to put me under is in look you throw my way I keep calling you for another and near closing time I say Pour me another shot of Tequila You can keep that salt and lime You've got a beautiful glow in your eyes tonight and we can dance til the first morning light You draw up close then softly say dream sailor.. keep passing through. but I insist I still feel the same the night's just right for me and you.. Pour me another shot of Tequila You can keep that salt and lime You've got a beautiful glow in your eyes tonight and we can dance til the first morning light we can dance til the first morning light The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ethome - did this bring back memories, oh yes. Tequila, in port, a beautiful senorita, lovely... BC |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, I like the rythm and rhyme of this poem. It's pretty. Hugs  Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Were you calling on a past experience, dear sailor man?  Enjoyable read! Warm hugs, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Where can you buy that Tequila? LOL enjoyed. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Eric, Long nights were so worth it, huh? Beautiful! I liked this. Yours, Marie "You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Eric, a beautiful write |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hey darlin....I can hear you singing this, soft and low....bring on the tequila dream sailor... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh I have to tell you - I sang it - to Garth Brooks song and you know that I don't mean to insult you, but that was too close and actually and it worked - try it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Eric, I love this, sweet friend, this would make a beautiful song, I love senoritas and the sea-faring lifestyle of Jimmy Buffett! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Bill Thanks I'm glad I brought back the memories. Garysgirl.....I want to thank Gary for sharing you with me so you could comment on this. Vandana...Thank you for stopping by once again I appreciate it. Hi Earth Angel ....Naw I wasn't calling on a past experience...well, not too much...smile....thanks very much for the comment Hey Sy it's the good stuff with the worm in the bottom....makes ya go crazy over the girls....thanks for the read and the response. Hi Marie......some long nights are worth it...grin...I want to thank you for your response I appreciate it. Hay Passing, it's always good to hear from my late night commenting buddy....thanks! Paula my dear girl how I have missed you....Good to hear from you again....thanks for the singing adjectives.....much appreciated. Sharon....I don't know what song you're refering to but I'll take the reference in good stride and say a special hello to my Canuck pen pal....email ya all my jokes ya know....write ya later! Noah...I want to thank you for those kind words. You give the nicest open warm comments.....Always good to hear from you. |
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