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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
¡¶October¡· The feet is similarly pure in the memory with the arm once I were wash and brushed , some people begin run to the north Some birds start to change residencing to south like a stubborn people, I start to hoard the corn and some leafs take the surplus desire went to cold This is the best way to go through a river Abandon some thing and some things The October is the beauty The days when I leaved are gray But I do not fear that, I will remember each place I passed by Count from onet to one hundred,then forget them gradually like a game, I have no excessive words for me So does the life, I love my countryside,houseand a woman Even some Irrelevant things, I know Those fishs and the fruit are kind, at a certain They are maturity together, with this city Become to my lover that I love deeplies I love her coquettish and noble I have made a promise, before the spring I will not abandon them |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is a noble and true pledge of heart. And since I live near a very big river, of course, these words had some impact on me: "This is the best way to go through a river Abandon some thing and some things..." Smile. That's the best advice I've heard in awhile. I may have to try that. Thank you, my new best friend!  |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
i do say thanks for you,you just speak out my feeling,in chinese ,it's "zhiji",(Bosom friend) mr best friend. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
zhiji smile. I like that much. Thank YOU. Now maybe I can sleep--I do make the nicest friends here.  *hearthugs* across miles... |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
thank you my friend. *hearthugs* across miles... i want know more about usa poem and english poem? can you tell me more? i think mt english,do not very well,so, we are chat eacher ,i also can study english,i ought to say thanks. |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
i forgot tell you something,today in China is Dragon Boat Festival,do you know this Festival? this day is commemorate a people,his name is quyuan,he is live in thousands years ago,he is a Patriot£¬love his country deeply,but his king do not like him,and there is also some bad guy circumvention him,and later,his country is Decline£¬ in this day¡¡he jumped a river(miluo river). |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh dearest friend, we are all so blessed to get to know so muc about your wonderful culture, your poetry already has me smiling and I can't wait to read much more from you! (big hugggssssssss) I too would love to get to know you better, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
i do not know if you can come to my bbs, i have a bbs,like this,there are mqny chinese poet in the bbs,i think we can Exchanges there. how do you think? all my friend? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Don't know the "Dragon Boat Festival" but I can imagine it. This piece you have penned here is a real true to heart poem....enjoyable read. The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
thank you, my friend,i hope one day you can come to China then i can shou you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoyed |
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