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Red Rose Love
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Red Rose Love |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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Im waiting eminating confused and sorting im waiting challenging and creating when you are often mistaking you are often the reason for my seasons, changing my leaves have fallen you came back around just in time to see the flowers bloom in the sunshine summer skies filled with the thought of you im falling for you once again, is this what you wanted,dear did you ever want it to end this love as red as a rose when your not around our flower grows wherever they're planted the seeds of my love you've watered this rose bud forever we grow together alone in the sun |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write and read,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Those last two lines throw a twist in there and I like the stimulating idea of that.....Nice write! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
perfect,just perfect.deep and passionate, long,lonely love.phil |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
you've watered this rose bud forever we grow together alone in the sun Ahh...what beautiful thoughts of love you express.  Patricia |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
hi this was grate |
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