Open Poetry #26 |
¡¶ home town ¡· |
chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
¡¶ home town ¡· The east breeze blows, and the winter pass by the green grass and the were road watered by the dew come on together the window were opened, last night the color of peach include the rain flooded all the the living traces I am a solitude ,a solitude always be fear of the sun twenty-one years go through the street at night But,my hometown! As you know I still is a boy Usually carry the schoolbag Glue the full mud in the new suit on the way home |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the window were opened, last night the color of peach include the rain flooded all the the living traces I am a solitude ,a solitude always be fear of the sun an interesting structure of images... and the poem itself an interesting read but I enjoyed the lines above the most... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
thanks for my friend! but i must go now ,it is time to go to bed. in my country is night,but yours are day |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hello my new best friend. I love your work. You write in images strung along together and the result is a peaceful, meditative quality. And that's not easy for me to achieve. (Yes, I call myself "serenity", but I am more fire than water, I fear.) Please do share more with us. |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
ok,my friend i will translate as possible cjinese poem as i can, i like exchanges¡¡our minds here. i love you and all friends here. . but i think my english do not very well,so there may have some new words,i do not know i hope you can explain it foe me,thank you. hug chinaesestone |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for giving us some glimpses of your life in your home town. --and don't worry about your English! It's far superior to my Chinese! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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chinesestone Member
since 2003-06-04
Posts 76China |
thank you my friend |
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