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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-06-03 10:49 PM


What ThunderMage wrote is in the bold.
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It's hard to love
When you are so far away
And it makes me so
So lonesome for you

But how to tell you
What I feel?
What on Earth
Should I do?


I wish I could see
Your smiling face
In front of me
Right now
Right this minute
For all eternity

I wish you could appear
In my arms forever.
I wish I could hold you,
And I'd never let go.


I wish I could kiss your lips
And hug you all day long
Forever and ever
Until our life is gone

I wish I could spend a lifetime
In your arms where I belong.
I'd hold you close and whisper
The softest love ever known.


I wish we were married
And never could be parted
And we will have a whole
Lifetime to show a love
Never departed

But it's hard to love
When you are so far away
And it makes me so
So lonesome for you

Cold hands means a warm heart

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1 posted 2003-06-03 10:57 PM


awww..dang.. you two, this is so tender and loving it's wonderful
ThunderMage
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2 posted 2003-06-03 11:02 PM


It's just like Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

ThunderMage
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3 posted 2003-06-04 10:43 PM


It took an angel to start this one.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-04 10:48 PM


Not only are your hearts as one, but your pens are as well! Very sweet and full of longing.

May your dreams come true for the both of you!

Warm hugs,
Linda

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5 posted 2003-06-05 04:44 AM


very nice writing
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6 posted 2003-06-05 07:27 AM


sweet.

This begs applause of pounding hearts on skin.


BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2003-06-06 06:08 PM


Much enjoyed the lonesome longing!
Nicely done you two~

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8 posted 2003-06-07 06:50 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I couldn't agree with you more, dearest friends, for I have been a victim of this kind of love and Joanna just kept too much away from me and she broke away from me ever since New Years Day! (sad sigh) I hope this love will be an exception, sweet friend, God Bless You Both and good luck, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Julie and Liam, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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