Open Poetry #26 |
It's Hard To Love (duet with ThunderMage) |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
What ThunderMage wrote is in the bold. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It's hard to love When you are so far away And it makes me so So lonesome for you But how to tell you What I feel? What on Earth Should I do? I wish I could see Your smiling face In front of me Right now Right this minute For all eternity I wish you could appear In my arms forever. I wish I could hold you, And I'd never let go. I wish I could kiss your lips And hug you all day long Forever and ever Until our life is gone I wish I could spend a lifetime In your arms where I belong. I'd hold you close and whisper The softest love ever known. I wish we were married And never could be parted And we will have a whole Lifetime to show a love Never departed But it's hard to love When you are so far away And it makes me so So lonesome for you Cold hands means a warm heart |
||
© Copyright 2003 the_loner_23 - All Rights Reserved | |||
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awww..dang.. you two, this is so tender and loving it's wonderful |
||
ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
It's just like Julie. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
||
ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
It took an angel to start this one. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
||
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not only are your hearts as one, but your pens are as well! Very sweet and full of longing. May your dreams come true for the both of you! Warm hugs, Linda |
||
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice writing |
||
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sweet. This begs applause of pounding hearts on skin. |
||
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Much enjoyed the lonesome longing! Nicely done you two~ |
||
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) I couldn't agree with you more, dearest friends, for I have been a victim of this kind of love and Joanna just kept too much away from me and she broke away from me ever since New Years Day! (sad sigh) I hope this love will be an exception, sweet friend, God Bless You Both and good luck, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Julie and Liam, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |