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Open Poetry #26

Oh so Lonesome

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-06-03 08:34 PM

I sit here and wait
And yet you do not
Show up

I can only wait
For so long
When I have so many
Things I must do

I wish things
Were back
To normal

Oh so lonesome...

Oh so lonesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2003-06-03 08:36 PM

ah this is quite a sad piece....I hope you don't have to wait too long - remember, life is short ....ciao Bella Roniece

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-06-03 08:53 PM

All things need change, and adversity, to prove their strength. It will all come when it should, Julie...just keep writing through it.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2003-06-03 09:01 PM

Don't really see this as being you but I sure enjoyed the read, well done.

jwesley

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-06-03 09:33 PM

This read lonely....well expressed. But,
I agree with Sunshine....all things come,
just sometimes when they want to, not when
we do.

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

5 posted 2003-06-03 10:04 PM

I know the feeling. I want my Dad's head on a plate because of it.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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