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........That Time.....
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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 . . It is that time just before slumber When my eyelids become heavy My breathing becomes deep. It is that time I feel your hand gently touch the small of my back. It is that time our hearts together beat evenly as one. Sweet rest ~ . . . Chris Barker 2002 ~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, I always dream ever so much of laying beside my dream girl in the future and speaking pillow talk with her with sheeps eyes, crying in joy seeing her smile! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah yes sweet sister....'that' time.  Love this...and you! Miss ya..wanna write a duet..soon? ~Hugs & Luv, Teed~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Noah sweetie!! Nancylee - I miss ya too. Ummm...maybe..possibly.....okay...we can write a duet...sure!! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A golden moment captured in a golden write...very beautiful Chris.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Chris - sleep softly... BC |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
That time.. should be remembered often and experienced even more so... well captured... now rest well |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
what else can i say but Fabulous!!!! Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Beautifully heartfelt and tender. The passion in those lines is phenomenal. It's a wonder what emotions one can convey in such a short amount of space. Simply stated: THAT ROCKED!!!! Junior Member, yv |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Such kind comments !! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It IS when there is just that touch that two are truly united as one... Beautiful! Annabelle is smiling! And...I see that a duet is in the making! Oh, happy eyes and heart! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-03-2003 08:52 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Karilea sweet lady. Annabelle will be smiling big time when she can finally read quietly beside the fireplace once again. Construction is ALMOST done! lol. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
A special and loving time of the night!  Loved the picture of you and Nancy. Huggles .... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awww..Marti, I love the pic. Thankyou..nighty night!  [This message has been edited by Nightshade (06-03-2003 10:45 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*yawning* yep, time for me to get going there too |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, this is so beautiful. I'll be looking for your duet with Nancy, too.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
passingshadows & Ethel - thankyou so much for reading and commenting. hugs! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes, yes, yes! Sweet dreams!  Warm nighttimes! EA |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Sweet dreams, indeed, of heart-filled bliss. Dreaming of my turn... Yours, Marie "You can be idealistic for all of ten seconds before you die." (Imitation of Life) [This message has been edited by Fading Away (06-04-2003 11:08 AM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Linda & Marie - thankyou ladies! hugs! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I could sigh with appreciation of a beautiful poem... or sigh with envy. *S* Oh what the heck... I'll do both! *G* I like this very much, sweet lady! *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh...I like that time...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very lovely Chris... hugss M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
suthern, James & Maureen, Thankyou for your welcome comments. hugs! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sweet dreams, my friend. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi Sue!! I wish you sweet dreams as well !! hugs across the miles!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness Chris - this is beautiful - ahhh if every night could be as sweet as your words . . . xxoo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
littlewing, aww..thankyou for your sweet comments. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ethel & Dixie - thankyou ladies!! [This message has been edited by Nightshade (06-08-2003 10:38 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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