Open Poetry #26 |
Sachet Of Light |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So tenderly to search for you among the ashes my heart has blazed A wildfire set, to kindle torches, from glowing coals unceasing Lighting up the surfaces of tranquil lakes, in crimson aches To flush the cheeks of skies, of flames to light the eyes, releasing While half of me will wander on into the folds of endlessness By beacon to redeem the part that you fulfill, from now until To flames that gobble wildly the empty space, a spirits chase Such is the glowing bed inside, the smoldering to flash collide and still From liquid fire to warm the hands that touch upon you ever soft In blue to white erotic burns the fever of a single sacred flight To join the wind and sweep the lust of meadows into blossoms sweet So tenderly to search for you among the ashes, to flame sachet of light Copyright Kkh 3/18/03 |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a very nice poem Kathaleen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This builds...beautifully! It gathers you in and bubbles within...and brims over... with love! Kathleen...as my granddaughter would say, "more than beautiful!" |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...Fabulous, heart-filled poem! Voting! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I was swept along with your poetic tide of love and loving... Love & Light, Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
IWIHWT! Awesome!! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very lyrical. Eric |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I enjoyed reading your write! >>QjQ<< forward to reading more! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kathleen: To flush the cheeks of skies, of flames to light the eyes, you breathed this into me . . . amazing and good luck xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - love your romantic side... My vote is in... BC |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
TD, if I could vote for this beautiful poem twice, I would. Sunkissed. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kathleen, I don't know how I missed this earlier, but am so glad to see it. It flows so smoothly I didn't breathe all the way through. Nothing I say could do it justice. Just know how completely enjoyable and touching to the senses it is!!! Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
You are truly one of my favorite writers here and this poem only goes to show the reason why. Just gorgeous! You have my vote. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Fine indeed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you always write such deep and sensual writes! (kiss on cheek) This is a true gem straight from your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you all very humbly for all of your comments, and for sharing your talents and gifts to inspire and teach. TD |
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