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Open Poetry #26

My Falling Star

apoetdreams
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 52
NJ, USA

0 posted 2003-06-03 03:44 PM

MY FALLING STAR

If love is not forever
why must it ever begin?
what mysterious spell
did I fall under?
My flesh still
illuminates
notions of a
true togetherness
I was blessed
to have once found.

And yet, when it dwindles
it falls like a star,
too bitter to crash or explode away
it fades into darkness
never known to
any other
star.

Where will I go, knowing
I could not change your course?
Knowing you could not change mine?
When we fall apart
we are split.
split away,
not apart,
from our
shining orbit
into
infinity
for a purpose lost.

Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-03 04:04 PM

a fabulous write of poetry,,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

apoetdreams
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 52
NJ, USA

2 posted 2003-06-03 07:10 PM

QJQ

Thank you for reading and for your comment!

Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them.

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