Open Poetry #26 |
Winter Nights |
Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
Winter Nights I touch your sobbing face, feeling the end, You my love, I hold dearest of all, Our family’s feud will stop our love, So now out of this life we must fall. The bitter wind freezes the tears, As we take up the vial, This drink is to the family and The warring way that we are in denial. My lips suck at yours, tasting the sweet poison As it slicks through my dying frame, I look to your eyes and see the love A love that none could tame. The snow falls on our lives, December claims our breath, The end of the warm season Symbolised by our death This is not your average love, This is ours forever and beyond, In death we will win the fight, And savour the unbreakable bond That binds our souls into one, Beyond the winds of this night, Our mortal love grows more and more, As we step into the light… |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
William move over! The next Shakespeare has arrived! Warm hugs, EA |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
Thank you very much I am glad you enjoyed it |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A beautiful work, well crafted and very much enjoyed. ThisDiamond |
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apoetdreams Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 52NJ, USA |
Very nice and toucing work. Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! Thank you for reminding me why it is that I love poetry so much. What a refreshing piece and so beautifully executed.
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
Thank you for reading I am glad you enjoyed it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
very good write peter, hope she's listening opps reading A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Peter J Marcroft Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 265York, England |
Thank you all for reading and I am glad you all enjoyed this piece |
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