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Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2003-06-03 08:10 AM

The windows of our minds remain open across the miles,
reflecting the good times and bad times, the laughter and the smiles.

We write about our worlds and the things that we see,of our hearts and souls and the need to set them free.

The rainbow casts it's colour into our lives of uncertain future,the stars chart the fate of humans and nature,
from largest whale to smallest creature.

Like trains racing into the night, our lives are parallel lines,
of questions and answers and seeking the signs.

The earth moves from night to day.
the record of life constantly plays,
a tune,with no real name...!

goodhrtd
Junior Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 12

1 posted 2003-06-03 08:15 AM

I really like these ideas. The broadness comparitively with the smallness of it all. I think it is a true reflection of life, as we all live it.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

2 posted 2003-06-03 09:06 AM

We write about our worlds and the things that we see,of our hearts and souls and the need to set them free.

Such a wonderful line, such a very true statement.

I enjoyed reading your piece and have come back to reread it several times.

Huggles, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

3 posted 2003-06-03 10:40 AM

Very insightful and hypnotic. I can't help but fall in love with your every word and idea. They're simply marvelous.

Junior Member,
yv

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-06-03 11:10 AM

GoldenRose~
Firstly, let me welcome you to Passions' ever-growing circle of poets and friends~

Enjoyed your penning~
*Huglets* across the water~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

5 posted 2003-06-16 11:51 PM

Hello Phil

This was absolutely beautiful and I am hooked on your writing now.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (06-16-2003 11:54 PM).]

D'sWhisper
Member

since 2003-06-16

Posts 68
Washington, USA

6 posted 2003-06-19 05:36 AM

How like a breeze rolling of the ocean! Very saturating... I like it. ~DW~

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