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No Good Reason
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No Good Reason |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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No Good Reason Eyes of ambiguous tears Sobs of uncertain cries An odd paradox of fears In a quandary of whys Unexplainable melancholy An ambivalence of feel A hopeless female folly Yet sorrow feels so real Revelations unrevealing No logic for this pain Process of heart healing Or tears to maintain sane? |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Revelations unrevealing No logic for this pain Process of heart healing Or tears to maintain sane?" oooo...I really like this part....makes you hope the heartache isn't for nothing  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A silky smooth flow...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Process of heart healing Or tears to maintain sane? ~*~ Don't ask... just allow...  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Patricia, I enjoyed this write, a thinking piece to ponder on and chew on for a while. Love works like this that really make you read, attempting to understand. Thanks for sharing, take care. Sincerely Rick |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...powerful and beautiful! Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tears release those feel-good endorphins!--- "Tears to maintain sane." Warm hugs, EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderous write Pat... Presented in the emotion of the moment, just enough impact to understand the quandry...well versed. I believe that tears are like jewels made especially for the emotions of human beings...they cleanse, they moistened...they soften and they heal. Hugs and Prayers, TD |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Even when the decisions we make, seem to, or do, make sense at the time. That same logic can be of no consequence, when the regretful pangs of heartbreak are reminding us that there are few real guarantees in life, if any... “No Good Reason?” Perhaps not, except to maybe try and learn, to try and let go, and to, not try, but to be, content, once again... Blessings Patricia! Very Heartfelt Write, Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (06-04-2003 12:51 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely written,,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - sorrow does feel so real, hope things are well with you... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Patricia, it hurts sometimes, doesn't it? It will get better, though slow, it seems sometimes.  Hugs  Ethel |
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