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Open Poetry #26

Window Pane

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2003-06-02 11:35 AM

window pane

looking thru the window
cloudiness within the pains
blurred memories
once cleaned
clear to view
we first met
smudges gone
life goes on
memories
now crisp

bernie

[This message has been edited by bslicker (06-02-2003 11:36 AM).]

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-06-02 12:31 PM

"blurred memories
once cleaned
clear to view"

just (((hugs)))

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-06-02 12:36 PM

life goes on, yes

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2003-06-03 11:42 AM

quote:
memories
now crisp

I dig this description..though it also reminded me of potato chips...

congrats on your 1000th post!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-06-03 12:36 PM

Outstanding verse Bernie.
Deeply touching indeed! TD

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-06-03 12:39 PM

Oh, I do know whereof you write--and you have written of it so well!

Warm hugs,
EA

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-06-03 01:06 PM

Bernie, I really like this.

hugs

Ethel
(Psstt!! I like the new picture, too!)

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

7 posted 2003-06-03 01:12 PM

We can see so much through a window pane. I enjoyed this

quatro

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