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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-06-01 07:01 PM


And You

The air
that I
breathe.

And you...

Who could ask
for anything
more.  

JamesLee
June01
2003

© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-01 07:05 PM


veiw words with a terrific expression,,,

QjQ

Patricia
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2 posted 2003-06-01 07:10 PM


Enough said, right?  I think so.

Love it, James!

Patricia

Margherita
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3 posted 2003-06-01 07:27 PM


You are breathing love.
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

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4 posted 2003-06-01 07:29 PM


I sure hope you finally found the oxygen that makes your heart pump m'friend!  Nice write.
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5 posted 2003-06-01 07:49 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful and shines with your love wishes! (big hugggssssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

J. K. Mitchell
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6 posted 2003-06-01 07:51 PM


Nice...very nice.

"Cuidado con mi corazon."--R. Martin

scorpio
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7 posted 2003-06-01 09:36 PM


Romantic and to the point...well done James..

believe in what your heart feels...

A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2003-06-03 04:45 AM


Well, someone is letting their heartlight shine! brightly I must say! I can always count on you to write sweet poems to inspire me!loved your short but sweet poem!
passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-06-03 04:56 AM


short and sweet...awesome!
quatro
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10 posted 2003-06-03 01:31 PM


Short and sweet....I like that!

(By the way, so am I....short and sweet that is )

Enchantress
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11 posted 2003-06-03 01:33 PM


Beautiful James..I love this one!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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