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The Darkest of Days
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The Darkest of Days |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Even on the darkest of days Your love radiates The feeling of light that I sense in you It is enough to give me faith Even on the darkest of days Your heart seeks mine And the ever growing darkness Finds me waiting Waiting for your touch and your Intense glow Even on the darkest of days I see you You as you are You are the stuff of fantasies Yet so tangible is the love that permiates From your body Even in the darkest of days Your eyes shine like the fullest moon On the duskiest of eves Standing out like Two streaks of silver, nay, gold In a field of tarnished copper Even on the darkest of days I love you Because you loved me first And first I felt love from you I felt the sun hotter than steam Even on the darkest of days The lightest of lights I see I sense I taste The sun Hot on my mind Sweet on my tongue Even on the darkest of days You're still here And all that was wrong is right again And you give me hope For love must begin and end with hope The hope that guides me through the thick briar The hope that leads me through the hardest stone The hope that takes me to you and watches our love The hope that helps me handle The darkest of days yv |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
hearfelt,deep and full of passion.welcome kindred spirit,from one new member to another. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
with the love you discribed, keeps all your hopes to reality. Good write  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...  this is beautiful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
yv A passionate write, enjoyed the read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what a nice way to say I love you to that special person |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
lovely piece very nicely expressed, and such a beautiful way to say how you feel about someone special Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW!I really loved your poem, even though the title contained the word dark, your words and passion were very light and refreshing..within each word I could feel what you wanted me to feel, very rare talent to make someone see your heart through your words! Your poem inspires me! |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
It's on the darkest of days that our true character shows. I enjoyed reading this... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--and on the darkest of days, the reading of such love would brighten them... Love & Light, Linda |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is that light, then, that warms you in the coolest of eve, and guides you well when all seems hopeless... may that light always shine for you.  |
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