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yv
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0 posted 2003-06-02 11:00 AM


Even on the darkest of days
Your love radiates
The feeling of light that I sense in you
It is enough to give me faith

Even on the darkest of days
Your heart seeks mine
And the ever growing darkness
Finds me waiting
Waiting for your touch and your
Intense glow

Even on the darkest of days
I see you
You as you are
You are the stuff of fantasies
Yet so tangible is the love that permiates
From your body

Even in the darkest of days
Your eyes shine like the fullest moon
On the duskiest of eves
Standing out like
Two streaks of silver, nay, gold
In a field of tarnished copper

Even on the darkest of days
I love you
Because you loved me first
And first I felt love from you
I felt the sun hotter than steam

Even on the darkest of days
The lightest of lights I see
I sense
I taste
The sun
Hot on my mind
Sweet on my tongue

Even on the darkest of days
You're still here
And all that was wrong is right again
And you give me hope

For love must begin and end with hope
The hope that guides me through the thick briar
The hope that leads me through the hardest stone
The hope that takes me to you and watches our love
The hope that helps me handle

The darkest of days

yv

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Goldenrose
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1 posted 2003-06-02 11:42 AM


hearfelt,deep and full of passion.welcome kindred spirit,from one new member to another.

bslicker
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state of mind
2 posted 2003-06-02 12:06 PM


with the love you discribed, keeps all  your hopes to reality.
Good write

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-06-02 12:51 PM


ah... this is beautiful!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-06-02 06:43 PM


yv
A passionate write, enjoyed the read.

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Gaia
5 posted 2003-06-02 09:17 PM


what a nice way to say I love you to that special person
whiskey
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6 posted 2003-06-02 10:14 PM


lovely piece very nicely expressed, and such a beautiful way to say how you feel about someone special


Julie

"Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. "

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2003-06-03 04:18 AM


WOW!I really loved your poem, even though the title contained the word dark, your words and passion were very light and refreshing..within each word I could feel what you wanted me to feel, very rare talent to make someone see your heart through your words! Your poem inspires me!
El_Campeador
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8 posted 2003-06-03 02:40 PM


It's on the darkest of days that our true character shows.

I enjoyed reading this...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
9 posted 2003-06-03 02:46 PM


--and on the darkest of days, the reading of such love would brighten them...

Love & Light,
Linda

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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2003-06-03 03:04 PM



It is that light, then,
that warms you in the coolest of eve,
and guides you well
when all seems hopeless...

may that light always shine for you.


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