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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

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0 posted 2003-06-02 09:52 AM

Hear the wind in the trees,surging softly, like the surf of the sea.washing into the ears like coves, flooding the mind.
Cumulus of clouds,vivid white and grey,race windblown across a background of crystal blue.
Sun suddenly blazes down from behind a cloud, for a second i am blind.
Swallows master the strong breeze and fly across the wrinkled water with ease.
Dragonflies hover near trees,seeking shelter from the(to them) hurricane force gale.
Shimmering green leaves of willow trees,identically swaying in the wind.gulls glide over the mere,stark white, like a ship's sail.
Softly,very softly,the wind hushes. My inward eye starts to imagine.Thinking,wondering,longing,pass in and out of my mind,before i think of the amber dream.
Blazing amber fades in then out, to reveal my dreams.Lying in a wild meadow,i can feel the warm sun on my face,flowers,trees and wild animals surround me.
Nobody else, just me with nature,me the protector, me at one with the world,the animals and i are truly free.
Amber fades to blue,serene sunlit,sunshafted, sea blue.Floating under the ocean, with whales and turtles in millions, i swim and feel the warm currents on my bare skin.
Amber returns, and fades to reality, back alone once more, i suddenly feel useless and helples. I was born at the wrong time, the past is where i belong, not this modern world i am in.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-02-2003 10:06 AM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-06-02 10:01 AM

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Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2003-06-02 10:04 AM

Beautiful post!
Welcome to Passions, hope you'll stick around and enjoy the variety of teeming life.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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3 posted 2003-06-02 10:14 AM

Amber fades to blue,serene sunlit,sunshafted, sea blue
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Well there you are

Hello again and officially, welcome to poetry land.
This is a lovely write of imagery and personification...I loved the alliterations!!
You've created a heady mix of dreamscape surreal images with this..
Well done poet sir...so nice to have you here with us...I look forward to reading more of your work.

Im still imagining your voice ...
can see the sparkle in your eyes.
I cant explain your power over me
Its understated understood & beautiful.
cj

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

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state of mind

4 posted 2003-06-02 11:01 AM

Nice write
Welcome to passions

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

yv
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

5 posted 2003-06-02 11:07 AM

Goldenrose, your words are like that to me; roses of gold. Awesome. Masterful. Beautiful. I can't wait to read more of your work. In fact it's almost a necessity for me to read more of your work. From a new member, to a new member, all the luck in the world to you.

New Member,
yv

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

6 posted 2003-06-02 12:58 PM

Welcome to Passions! I have enjoyed your entrance and will look for more! Good to have you with us!

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