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The Slide
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The Slide |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Gleaming midst the green of forest Secret in the woods mature Tall as childhood remembers Through the seasons to endure Rung by rung a little nearer Stepping up to see the sights Touching high growth, seeing clearer All around from dizzied heights Smiles broken at the offset As the ones of long ago Tall the feeling comes to claim me Come to grips with trips below In the thought of slickly going Body set and ready…go That awaits, the journey knowing Whisked away of all I know Gleaming mighty in the forest Secrets brought into the light Tall as childhood remembers Sped away too fast all right Copyright Kkh 6/1/03 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Memories of a slide brought to life by one found......penned very well of the emotions and the wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece very nicely written and expressed, I enjoyed it alot  Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm going down right behind Barry....Wheeeeeeee! Lovely language in this reflection. The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write and read,,,,, QjQ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
TD, This is wonderful. You know, I have a 4 year old little girl who is extemely active. We go to the park and she wants mama to swing and slide with her. Sometimes I am tired and just want to be the spectator, but she has a way of prodding (nice word for nagging, LOL) but I have some fun, girl! I get to relive my childhood with my playmate, my own little, Macy girl. What is so funny is she looks just like me when I was little and she is one heck of a ball of energy. So, it is kind of like playing with the child me. Make sense? We have the grandest times. Have to wonder who has more fun, Macy or Mama??? Your words are always so perfect. Patricia |
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