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Moon Kissed
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Moon Kissed |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Moon Kissed My lips tingle with the memory burned red with lingered passion Is this the magic of necromancy from a spell of obsession Flames spiral at your remembered touch that made fire and ice equal In vision my arms reach out to clutch one who performs the sequel Flesh quivers beneath tender caress while hearts beat in unison Tongues intertwine sharing shortened breaths desiring to imprison With the waning night feelings persist to feed consuming hunger Blazing eyes reflect a pair moon kissed through the night, lovers conquer Startime |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Startime55 - I read your writing and it's excellent/ writings that come from a softer heart. 'Blazing eyes reflect a pair moon kissed' BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done Karen, very good flow to it, and a sensually perfect write... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautiful Karen.. You write romance so well! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful to have you back here  M |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Lovely ! Very nice indeed.  Julie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Just fantastically lovely~ You 'know' the moon-a-holic in me LOVES this one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Karen, this is lovely, sweet friend, I know this peculiar feeling and wonder what it must be like to represent such a silhouette! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Flames spiral at your remembered touch that made fire and ice equal In vision my arms reach out to clutch one who performs the sequel' That...is a cool verse!  |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Ooooh! I really enjoyed this! Great write you have here!! GREAT! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, no doubt Startime enjoys the company of the moon's magic .... Wonderful and stirring! Love, Margherita |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How nice to see you again. An amazing poem you have here. It all sounds quite heavenly. Sandra |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Startime, this is just lovely. Soft pictures of moonlit moments written spledidly in verse. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kissing under the moon and being kissed by the moon, makes for a very pleasant evening--and read! Love & Moonlight, EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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poetSeaMaiden Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 107 |
Well, I don't know if all these people are ASLEEP or what, but my monitor is SMOKING this is so passionately HOT! LOL Or maybe my mind is just in a gutter, I'm not sure, but this reads HOT to me! I love how you compared everything to the moon etc. WOW! EXCELLENT read!  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, Such incredible writing. Are you the Startime that was writing here when I first joined? If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
beautiful write,,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Thank you all for such wonderful replies...you are all so inspiring that I have to often come just to read your words... Larry...Yes I am the same Startime as was here a while ago...I do not write as much now for I am working on a book...but I often come to read to have my heart touched by the talent of those whose words I love so much...**hugs** |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply beautiful ! hugs, Chris |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
This is incredible. Two days ago I wrote an email to your old address and it bounced. Just wanted you to know that I had been thinking of you and missed your presence. Wow! I'm so glad you are here even if less frequent. I don't write as much either. But more intensely based on this past years experiences.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, this is a beautiful love poem....and yes, it is very sensual. I especially liked this ending. With the waning night feelings persist to feed consuming hunger Blazing eyes reflect a pair moon kissed through the night, lovers conquer Very beautiful. Hugs Ethel |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Thank you so much for your responses, Chris and Ethel..I am glad you like it... Larry...My email has change to what is given here now...I do appreciate knowing that I came to the thoughts of such a wonderful person as you...You touch me with your words... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Startime55 - words of romance well written, what else is there? BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well Done. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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