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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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turn me around and I am Adam take my hat and I am naked in the sun let me into the garden I want to see where the eyes can play and run follow the talk it is enormous smoky sound and a din to swallow down the juice was robotic-numb find a leaf to confuse the moral ground see the black suits laughing green is bound in a gold hand blurring eyes I sip at nectar fruit watch the trees sway in bass-drum serpent guise |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write i enjoyed reading It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always fascinated by your works |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah...your mind traveled far from the din and suits...but you still found time to share it with us... thank you, Brian! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, this was different, but I sure did like it. Very good writing, Brian.  hugs, Ethel |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very interesting write from the beginning onward and a nice take on it I must say. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh my mad, mad, viking. You DO worship like no other. (wicked eyebrows) mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed watching you sway in disguise  |
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