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Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06

Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 2003-05-30 11:08 PM

Eznorbrevlis and Krischer
.
he was the silver-bronze hatchling
they called him Eznorbrevlis
he danced among the clouds
and plunged beneath the waves
and played mystical antics
with his bonded human youngling
.
she lived in a cottage in the forest
very near where the water
cascaded to the lake
her name was Krischer
.
In her mind she was dipping and diving
thru clouds, spiraling and hovering; then splash
she shivered at the bite of the water
as she realized she wasn’t even wet
.
A silver-bronze blur outside the window
intruded on this adventure
as silly musical musings
flooded her mind
.
she smiled opening the cottage door
then again, that blur
in the thicket closest to the shed
she peered around the corner
as a spiny tailbob disappeared into the shed
.
she crept as quietly as she could
keeping her mind blank
throwing the door open wide
she stopped in her tracks
.
there he was in the middle of the shed
amidst empty flower pots
garden tools and other utensils
leaning against the main timber
head resting against straw bails
wings curled around himself dripping wet
fast asleep!
.
Enotneicna
SLR
5-29-03

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2003-05-30 11:13 PM

A complete reality!

Really well done.

Enotneicna
Member

since 1999-06-06

Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

2 posted 2003-05-30 11:41 PM

icebox........thanks......this is one of a series of Dragon poems i'm working on for a book....I have two artists to consider for the illustrations....i think it will be great when it is done.

many blessings
always
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-31 03:35 AM

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-05-31 09:03 AM

Enotneicna~
No one writes
the dragon's plight
better than you do~

Compelling read ... creatively magnificent~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2003-05-31 10:00 AM

I love this quaint nicely presented story.
You make the reader create such images of anticipation....Great!!

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