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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-05-30 08:56 PM

I came across the fray of satin
peeking from box, packed away.
There in the closet rummaging
while bored the other day.

The deep red of love remembered
the feel, the slip upon skin.
Nights then envisioned my love
the treasures of forgotten sin.

I placed them then upon my bed
luxuriating in mid of day,
but, my love, twas not the same
with you so far away.

WhiteRose 05/30/03

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (05-30-2003 09:03 PM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-05-30 09:01 PM

perfect flow and rhyme Anne... (someday soon maybe I will try those satin sheets myself)
Have a nice weekend

M

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

2 posted 2003-05-31 01:11 AM

hey Anne

memories...taste different

the fine fabric.......a little coarser

nice to read you again

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-05-31 01:13 AM

very nice!!!

It's the quality of the complement that i feel, not the quanity.

ljossberir
Member

since 2003-05-04

Posts 81
Ny, USA

4 posted 2003-05-31 02:29 AM

Oh,wow! I'm not much for this kind of topic, but this poem is just stunning. Excellent, beautiful, perfect flow, powerful!
-matt

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-05-31 02:49 AM

just beautiful

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2003-05-31 11:23 AM

This is simply wonderful. In fact, it brought a similar episode to my own mind. No satin...blue, 200-count thread.

Wonderful flow, beautiful images, a great unfolding.

Patricia

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-05-31 05:42 PM

Tell me about it...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-05-31 06:47 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, this is a very heartfelt write, sweet friend, I hope all is well now and may those memories always shine in your heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2003-05-31 07:58 PM

Bootiful Ms Rose. Nice to read you again...where ya bin?

Maree

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-05-31 08:27 PM

enjoyed

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2003-05-31 08:55 PM

WhiteRose - memories are found, some of them are so precious, as these you write of...

BC

22NICK22
Member

since 2003-05-29

Posts 54

12 posted 2003-05-31 09:07 PM

good job

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