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QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-05-30 02:17 PM

female needs love
and
male wants love.

female needs trust
and
male wants lust.

female wants discuss
and
male gets disgusted.

female becomes jilted
and
male becomes wilted.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-05-30 02:27 PM

This is very thruthful. I really liked this poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-05-30 04:05 PM

Glenn, this is true with some, maybe,
but not all...like mine.

Avery thoughtful write, friend.
Hugs

Ethel

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-05-30 04:28 PM

This is a cute little wiggle of poem!
You know, I understood so well the message, and the humor, and the depth this poet went to, in order to deliver it so well.
Appreciate the quality of this write. TD

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2003-05-30 04:43 PM

Well, there's some real absolutes in this piece to a certain degree.....It is something both sexes can relate to.
I enjoyed the read

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-05-30 04:47 PM

Glenn...you gave all of our weaknesses
away!! Cute write, enjoyed it.

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

6 posted 2003-05-30 04:49 PM

An interesting juxtaposition

J

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

aran
Junior Member

since 2003-05-18

Posts 34

7 posted 2003-05-30 05:08 PM

An interesting write, no doubt.

It's just long enough to provide the full and intended effect, yet it is not too long where the overall punch is weekened.

Well done.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

8 posted 2003-05-30 06:18 PM

hard words old chap. good, but hard.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

9 posted 2003-05-30 07:13 PM

An average stated here. Thank Goodness there are still above average men and women! Those who recognise their average frailty, learn to rise above it and seek to please the "other." In the search, they even become pleased with themselves! A keen observation, QjQ!

Blessings!
Shirl

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-05-30 07:19 PM

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

11 posted 2003-05-30 07:20 PM

A true write... but not absolute truth.Good poem
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

12 posted 2003-05-30 07:47 PM

Much enjoyed!!

believe in what your heart feels...

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

13 posted 2003-05-30 08:47 PM

Kind of says it all in a nutshell doesn't it.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

14 posted 2003-05-31 12:15 PM

Ahhh...The Venus-Mars Wars.
Great truth be found in your verse...
In my experience of the universe.

Good write, Q!

Patricia

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

15 posted 2003-05-31 08:34 PM

QjQ, always good to read someone elses opinion of life and love, of man and woman, enjoyed.

Sincerely
Rick

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