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Open Poetry #26

Longing

morefiah
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 150
Spanish Town, Jamaica

0 posted 2003-05-30 02:12 PM

With clouds flitting
across a pitch black sky,
my mind sought after
memories of you and I.
And when lightning skewered,
the twilight air,
my heart was longing,
wishing you were there.

With every drop
Of the falling rain
It seemed as if I
was seeing you again;
and holding you too,
stroking your smooth skin,
and loving you,
amidst that stormy din

Until it seemed that
my eyes were pouring too,
for want of one moment
of what I had with you.
Entrusting myself
to the warmth of your heart,
To hold you, touch you, love you
and never part.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-30 02:14 PM

very nice write!!!

gMt

joelle
New Member

since 2003-04-01

Posts 8

2 posted 2003-05-30 02:29 PM

I think that this is beautiful. What a wonderful write!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-05-30 02:32 PM

This is such a beautiful and wonderful poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-05-30 02:36 PM

When the thunder rolls...
it rumbles throughout one's heart...
Thank you, Morefiah...
for such a look
into yours.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-05-31 01:38 PM

beautiful

morefiah
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 150
Spanish Town, Jamaica

6 posted 2003-06-02 10:47 AM

Sincere thanks to all for your very kind words. Y'all can celebrate with me... My muse saw fit to return. Still don't know what I did to offend her though.

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