Open Poetry #26 |
Children . . . . . . . . . . (Rictameter) |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~*~ Children Laughing, Playing, Singing, Dancing, Smiling, Learning, Growing, Hugging, Skipping, Carefree, Joyous, Giving, Sharing, Guileless, Hopeful, Open, Wondrous, Trusting, Friendly, Happy and Pure. Loving Angel Children. ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (05-30-2003 11:19 AM).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
A poetographic moment... Thank you, EA |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
put togeather nice, very good gMt |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent and oh, so true. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EarthAngel~ I *smile* ... they are all that ... and more, aren't they ? What joy~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so true. I really like the way you put this together. Awesome. Write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This says it all...and beautifuly too! Eric |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very well done. You certainly have the knack for these types of poems EA...especially liked the theme of this one. TD |
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Dreamless Decay Junior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 13MO |
Reminded me of when I was a kid, I was in need of a good memory thanks for putting that up for us to read. "Looking over your shoulder fleeing from The Reaper...Look closer seeing only your own reflection in a puddle of rain." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
a diamond without the ruff... well done Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Linda, excellent theme and a superb job of laying it all out.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I honestly cry every time I think of children as they are truly God's most beautiful creation and they truly can teach everyone just as much as we can teach them with the values of love and innocence! (wipes tears) I want to devote my life to helping children, and next week for a month I'm going to be the substitute teacher for young bi-lingual children in summer school! (don't worry, it's only in the early day so I'll have time for you and my Passions friends! ) (kiss on cheek) You bring the children of the world many smiles with yout angel eyes, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderfully written, children are so beautiful to watch do all of those things and to share things with Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I am glad I didn't miss this one...a wonderful write here...it is so true, and then we grow up! Ahhh...to be a child again! Loved this, Patricia |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Earth Angel, this is of a terrific format and the content so true, very much enjoyed. Sincerely Rick |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Everything about children expressed in a diamond of a poem! Excellent write! Brought memories of long ago! Thanks! Blessings! Shirl Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Pure innocence and love. Too bad life can come along and sometimes ruin them. Huggles dear lady ... Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You don't live in a shoe? LOL |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, this so beautiful...... and in absolutely perfect form, too!!! LOL (You knew I'd have to mention the "rictameter" form, didn't you? HeeHee!!) Thank you, Lady Hugs, Ethel |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Very beautiful! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Children! You captured their essence so beautifully. May we all now and then remember and draw from this source of innocence! Much love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you all so very much for the warm and thoughtful replies! God bless you! Love & Light, Linda |
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