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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2003-05-30 08:36 AM

Temptress (ADV 5/30/03)

She moves around me
Circling like a vulture
Waiting for the right moment
To swoop down

She moves in me
Warming my blood and body
With her hot breath
Of wanton power
And shameless desire

She moves through me
Possessing my mind
Controlling my actions
Easing into me with graceful abandonment

She is the part of me
That you have awakened
A sleeping Madonna
Waiting for your kiss
She is the temptress
Of my strength and desire

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-05-30 08:40 AM

Susan,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-05-30 01:22 PM

neat

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-05-30 01:48 PM

All I can say is "I am speechless".

Cold hands means a warm heart

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

4 posted 2003-05-30 02:32 PM

I can't begin to explain how brilliant this is.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2003-06-02 10:33 AM

She is the part of me
That you have awakened
A sleeping Madonna
Waiting for your kiss
She is the temptress
Of my strength and desire

perhaps you should get better aquainted with her... and him...

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

6 posted 2003-06-02 10:47 AM

Absolutely stunning. I loved the image and the metaphore of the vulture waiting to swoop down. Thank you for sharing these emotions. I hope to read more of your lovely artwork.

New Member,
yv

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

7 posted 2003-06-02 02:11 PM

^bump^

joelle
New Member

since 2003-04-01

Posts 8

8 posted 2003-06-02 04:03 PM

This is the first of your's that I have a chance to read, and WOW!
Looking forward to reading more!

Joelle

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-06-02 04:13 PM

Wonderful...much enjoyed!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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