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Outside a Shadows Fall
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Outside a Shadows Fall |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Outside a Shadows Fall I stepped outside a shadows fall Into the light of day And heard the bells that toll and call And listened what they say They sang to me in beauties rhyme A lullaby of send They sang to me of fleeting time Of passage to the end The sky was full of colored chalk The air with due with damp A rainbow offered me a walk To heaven on its ramp My senses touched the fleeting light A sight beyond compare I closed my eyes and felt the bright And made a wish of dare God grant me rest this feathered nest For I have done my very best. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The sky was full of colored chalk The air with due with damp A rainbow offered me a walk To heaven on its ramp My senses touched the fleeting light A sight beyond compare I closed my eyes and felt the bright And made a wish of dare God grant me rest this feathered nest For I have done my very best. ============================== Yes you have and yes you do...every time you pick up your pen and rhyme.  The sky was full of colored chalk and I couldnt love that line anymore if I tried...you are sooooooo kewl me winkie king of subtle imagery. Love this poem me groovy Sy-guy, and the poet that wrote it!!  *ww*    |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Another piece well done it seems we have different view of shadows, I enjoy your poetic views Gloom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your very best surpasses so many others, Sy... Why do I know? Because your poetry doesn't lie. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning read Sy! Love the sky being full of colored chalk! Have a wonderful TGIFriday. ~Hugs & Tea, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Morning, Mr. T.! Oh, my dear sweet Sonateer, when your time does come, you need not fear! God will make the most beautiful rainbow ramp to Heaven for you to find your way back Home to Him!  Lovely poem! Loving hugs, EA |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your best can't be beat, dear Sy... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My dear Seymour, this is so very beautiful. I especially loved this part..... The sky was full of colored chalk The air with due with damp A rainbow offered me a walk To heaven on its ramp My senses touched the fleeting light A sight beyond compare I closed my eyes and felt the bright And made a wish of dare God grant me rest this feathered nest For I have done my very best. Hugs,   Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, do I love the picture that this poem paints for me!! Beautiful write Seymour. Sorry I am late with the eats....had company this morning. So, a light lunch it shall be - hot biscuits with honey - along with your tea! hugs & giggles, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
What a peaceful lullaby. I think I shall call this to mind when I am having one of my sleepless nights. Beautiful, as always. Patricia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you my Tinkerbell how about some twinkies and raspberry tea somewhere in fantasy land. Randy will take me anywhere you say. Professor, Enjoy your comments. Sunshine What would I do without you, Hugs. Nancy, you too love. Earth Angel, Can I tell him I've been recomended by one of his Earths Angels. Nan, Love ya sweet. Ethel, You are a blessing, hugs. Chris, Honey with honey, sounds good to me. Patricia, You are a love. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Wonderful sonnet. Enjoyed the read very much. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Awesome. Should this be the entrance exam... ...I don't doubt your wish shall be granted.  CG |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Part of the best of you is the gift you have given us. Thanx Sy. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an ending! you're famous for those. [This message has been edited by passing shadows (05-30-2003 07:24 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eloise Thank you so much for the read and reply. CastleGuard Well I do know an earth angel. LOL Magnus A friend indeed. passing, And you pass like a shadow, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I'm a sucker for a GREAT TITLE~ This one beckoned me in ... adored the read~ As a fact of matter  I think the title is a poem within itself~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God truly knows how to make everyone's day and where the light beacons, that is where the nest rests, where you and all of us little fledglings shall learn to fly! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a love, Noah, Always enjoy your replies. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If He needs any references for you, sweet Seymour, just have Him log onto PIP. *G* This is beautiful... from the incredible title to the lovely images... Great work! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Well every vote counts, LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, I see your smile, |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Brilliant sir. Absolutely brilliant. The thick and illustrious imagery has tickled my fancy and has whet my senses. I love every inch of this poem. Hope to read tons more of your work. New Member, yv |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
yv Thank you so much, I hope I have time to write a ton more. LOL |
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