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In A Meadow - Poet deVine & Bill Charles
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In A Meadow - Poet deVine & Bill Charles |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“IN A MEADOW” ~~~~ In a meadow I would lay with you, to know you, if I could, to hold you close in my embrace, to begin new, only if you would… We would breathe the scent, of love and summertime, sweet kisses of sunshine, sweet passion sublime… Whispers scent of sweet perfume, fragrance of you to mystify, moist lips tracing into a trance, passions felt within to amplify… Soft meadow grass caresses, words that sigh in poetry, eyes closed we wonder, is this a dream, or reality… A dream of sweet violets I can taste, for your lips are intense and through, to hold you warm is of heart’s want, as I lay here in a meadow with you… ~~~~ Poet deVine & Bill Charles |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
As I said before...a beautiful blending of pens and words. Very much enjoyed! ~Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
A beautiful duet that was so much enjoyed. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brilliant job guys . . . I like the flow of this and the beauty of two amazing writers in one . . . xxoo |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Wonderfully romantic piece from the both of you. It is amazing how closely you mirrored each other's thoughts. Great work from you both!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very romantic poem from two of my favorite romantic writers.  Hugs to you both,  Ethel |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Bill is so easy to write with..his romantic verses are inspirational. He made it seem effortless!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This collaboration turned out real nice.....a very enjoyable read. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I swear I could almost smell the sweet aroma of passionate wildflowers, and feel the soft grasses waving in a gentle breeze... Very alluring, Wonderful write you two! Richy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A lovely duet, well done both of you! enjoyed very much. Maree  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
You two are the wildflowers and the summer breeze the hint of everything that's good and brings me to my knees. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Romance sung sweetly in your duet. Patricia |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A beautiful duet, by two most creative favorites! Soft as a spring rain. TD |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This is done so very well, so fluid, I don't even want to know who wrote what. Some poets blend? The two of you mix. Beautiful! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bravo! Bravo! Just a beautiful duet! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Always nice to visit a meadow...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Thanks all for the replies. Poet deVine thank you for the opportunity to write with you... BC |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Anytime Bill...anytime! I think it's a lot of fun doing duets - it gets you out of your own writing mode so you have to reflect someone else's style. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Bill and Sharon, this is beautiful, dearest friend, I'm blessed to see this collaboration of talents happen and in result...a beautiful Renoire-esque portrait of meadow splendor! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You both, sweet friends, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Bill and Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A dream of sweet violets I can taste, for your lips are intense and through, to hold you warm is of heart’s want, as I lay here in a meadow with you love it... *s M |
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