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Open Poetry #26
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bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
0 posted 2003-04-18 04:09 PM


layered paint
melts away,

heart on heart
soul to soul,

next to you,

initial walls
come
tumbling down,

unravelling
yet,
one final trace,

of separation,

as i wait
to lift
this see-through veil,

and have this
first time
kiss
with you
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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
1 posted 2003-04-18 06:14 PM

aww, this is lovely

Maree.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-04-19 01:39 PM


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-04-20 03:07 AM

Enjoyed...James
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-04-20 04:03 PM

BB:  
I am watching you fly through these pages . . .

this is beautiful!

xxoo
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
5 posted 2003-04-20 05:20 PM

oh gee it's been so many years ago but i still remmeber my first kiss,

thanks for the write
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2003-05-25 01:56 AM

cool!
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