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Big Brother |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
 At times I wonder if I told you how good of a brother you was to me or just how much I needed you to share in my joy and how proud I was of you Did I ever tell you how much you helped me when we was growing up sometimes I wonder if you realized how very important to me you was You was so dear to me at times it is still hard for me to deal with the fact that you are no longer here Now today is your birthday I want to hug you one more time and tell you I love you Big brother I miss you so much every day I know in my heart the closeness we shared you knew you was so special to me the way I knew I was special to you Even though we told each other often that we loved each other when one is gone the one left behind wishes for a chance to say I love you and one last hug photo from Webshots In memory of my brother Ronald 5/28/46-9/8/94 [This message has been edited by carol (05-29-2003 07:12 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is such a sweet poem. if your brother were alive he would have loved it.  Just as all of us love this poem.Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very touching write.......I appreciate the feelings of closeness. The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Julie, thank you so much for such sweet words Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
ethome,thank you I love for familys to be close too Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rita, I love this poem. I know how bad you've been hurting and you told it very well in this poem. God bless you, Rita, and I hope you're feeling lots better real soon!!!!!! Heart hugs to you from us,  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
geez, this is so beautifully sad...a wonderful write |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
touching the screen, remembering MINE. *hearthugs* |
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