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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-05-29 03:16 PM


There are things
Smart and stupid
That all people do
When in love

Some people in love
Sometimes still have a hard time
Saying 3 simple words
Like I love you

When in love
Sometimes you act foolish
And do stupid things
That hurt

When in love
Sometimes you wish
You could say everything
You wish you could say to her

When in love
You let your emotions flow
And this can show
How much love you have

And these are just a few things
You do when in love
But many more
Can be named.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2003-05-29 04:00 PM


All very true and thank you for the reminders.
Nicely presented.

The best teachers have the biggest ears

ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2003-05-29 04:28 PM


Yea... I know the feeling when I think about you Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
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carol
Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
3 posted 2003-05-29 07:58 PM


Julie,such a nice poem and I have always heard that I love you was such powerful words I  guess that is why people has so many problems saying them

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

ben_pelling
Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 59
Isle of Wight UK.
4 posted 2003-05-29 08:02 PM


WOW!! Julie this is GREAT! I wish I could write some peotry like this.

Ben.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
5 posted 2003-05-30 04:20 AM


very good write Julie
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