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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Presence He Out doing what he does Thinking slipsiding thoughts Of her, Feeling Full She Inside doing what she does Upsidedown thoughts reveling In him, Feeling Full Presents [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-29-2003 03:17 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gosh how you make me smile!! What wonderful images this brought to mind. ~Loving hugs, Nancy~ *thank you*  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very, very nice!! gMt |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice format...  M |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sigh Karilea, this is a beautiful Vignette of him and her of love. going to find number 2  Maree. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I've come back to add this to my library M. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Karilea I really wish I knew what they are. I do know that the writing is lovely. Not another form of something you put on a salad is it? Something that makes your mind write interesting differently languaged things?!?!? The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and of course, my mind fell in and out of the gutter about four or five times... Sheesh! Nice! |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
You handled this exceptionally well! Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea!! This I like! Sometimes you just capture it! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LOL (giggle...giggle) Me laughing at Ethome and Barry's reply. Well, my friend, I don't know what this form is, either, but it sure is pretty. What is it? Is it syllable count or what? Whatever, I sure do like it.  Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-29-2003 07:48 PM).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
such creativity  [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-30-2003 08:58 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat |
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