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Fariegirl
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0 posted 2003-05-29 11:07 AM



You once asked "Will the sky always be blue?"
I said "For always and forever."
You asked "Will the water always shine?"
I said "For always and forever."
You asked "Will the flowers always smell?"
I said "For always and forever."
Then you had to think, you must have thought for hours,
You thought about the sun, and the moon, yet you asked no questions,
After you thought and thought you finnaly asked one single question,
You asked "Will I always be loved?"
I said "For always and forever."


cc Katharina Lee 2003

© Copyright 2003 Kathryn Duncan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-29 11:39 AM


lovely ... lovely ... lovely.
I envisioned this as a moment of innocence between mother and child, but it could apply to anyone in love as well.
wonderful write poetess Fariegirl

Darkness cannot drive out darkness ... only light can do that.
Hate cannot drive out hate ... only love can do that.
MLK

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2 posted 2003-05-29 01:25 PM


well done!
GG
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3 posted 2003-05-29 01:29 PM


simpley beautiful
..innocent love
aww the sweetness!

Always, Alyssa

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4 posted 2003-05-29 02:35 PM



A promise...well kept.

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5 posted 2003-05-29 07:57 PM




(smiles) Oh Katherina, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, you can never make promises you can't keep but you truly speak the truth as blessings will come true to those who believe in them! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Katherina, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Fariegirl
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6 posted 2003-05-29 09:58 PM


Thank you everyone.. I would also like to say that Katharina Lee is only my pen name... however if you do wish to adress me by it then you are more then welcome to.
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7 posted 2003-05-30 03:15 PM


wow kat, this is awesome. i luv it.....


ri

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8 posted 2003-05-30 03:21 PM


I love this, too. It seems like such
a sweet innocent love.  

Hugs  
Ethel

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