An Old Pain From An Old Scar

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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2003-05-29 02:27 AM

There is simply too much history here.
I tried to figure
if I hated you more for breaking his heart
or so obliviously taking it away from me.
Words
sweet gestures
and soft romantic clues
that no one could guess but the two of you
long ago
when my heart was breaking before I realized.
Why am I subjecting myself to this kind of sadness
when there is so much love now to have?
I suppose I hate you
(if I could hate)
because you will always be there
announcing yourself into his heart
on quiet days
when the color green
stands out in someone's eyes.
There are simply too many nights waiting
that I wish I could erase.
So why am I putting myself through this pain
wishing your memory could dissappear
wishing you weren't the cause
of many lonely April nights.
Why can I forgive him
and not you
when you were obviously oblivious
that he left my heart for yours?

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-05-29 02:28 AM

dang, that aches. hugs to you

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2003-05-29 10:09 AM

I have many scars. I am always astonished when one "wakes up" for no apparent reason and becomes red and sore. I think the soul reacts the same way at times.

Great poem, thank you for sharing it.

[This message has been edited by icebox (05-29-2003 12:04 PM).]

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

3 posted 2003-05-29 10:23 AM

Whoa...this is great! I really like it..good write! ~Jess

"What I am is good enough if I would only be it openly."

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

4 posted 2003-05-29 11:18 AM

Just AWESOME!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-05-29 12:04 PM

Awesome Temptress

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-05-29 12:12 PM

This flowed with the twinge of regret...never to be seen in such an open and honest deluge.
Extraordinary talent! TD

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-05-29 01:17 PM

TemptyOne~
So raw ... so real~

'on quiet days
when the color green
stands out in someone's eyes'

THIS ? ... too familiar~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2003-05-29 02:53 PM

I agree with Marge. You are really pouring it out lately.

Lots of feeling behind these words.

M

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2003-05-30 12:28 PM

Damn girl, this is powerful. I love the way you write life so raw and honest. This is a keeper~

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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